Any comments,crit or praise,would be welcome.Especialy on the MASH.This is only my second try at step infusions.Maybe some one could tell me that my criticism of my tun size is misdirected.(HOPE

Otter Pale Ale
Style: Some Kind of Pale Ale
Type: All grain Size: 5.5 gallons
Color: 13 HCU (~9 SRM)
OG: 1.057 FG: 1.012
All temperatures are deg.Farenheit.
Brew Date: Friday, December 18, 2009
Bitterness: 28 IBU
Alcohol: 5.8% v/v (4.6% w/w)
Grain: Total grain 12 Lbs
8 lb. 12oz. oz. British pale
8 oz. Wheat malt
1 lb. Belgian aromatic
1 lb. American crystal 10L
12 oz. American crystal 20L
Boil:
60 minutes SG 1.047 6.75 gallons
Actual SG: 1.048 6.5 gallons.Add extra qt.( pre boiled )
at flame out.
Wirfloc x 2 15 min.
Hops:
1 oz. Saaz (5.8% AA, 45 min.)
1 oz. Saaz (2.5% AA, 45 min.)
1 oz. Saaz (2.5% AA, 15 min.)
Yeast:
Safale us - 04 Dry Ale Yeast.
Pitch at 65°,ferment 68°.
( actual was 66* )
Mash:
70% efficiency
Three rest infusion (F°): 115°/150°/168°.
Actual mash went as follows (I' new at this).
First rest 114* 20 min. Second rest 152* 75 min.
Water allowance ran out and could not get 168* rinse.
Settled for 165*. All went well otherwise.
Due to my small mash tun ( 5 gal.round water cooler ) the mash was split between
two vats,5 gal. and two gallon.Temerature rests went about the same in both,however
I believe the 5 gallon one was more efficient.
6.49 gallons of wort was collected at 1.048 SG and a calculated 70% BHE per
'The Beer Recipator' program for finding efficiency.
OG was 1.056 @ 5.5 gallons.